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11-09-2011, 07:44 PM
Hey everybody, here's a few more portrait practice shots from my little makeshift studio. Please... comment away :)
11-14-2011, 01:45 AM
I don't know studio photography so take this with a grain of salt
I think your focus is pretty good.
The wrinkled backdrops detract from the shot- I find myself looking at them instead of the subject. (That should be an easy enough fix I should think.)
The shadows are just a touch deep maybe.
These are just my impressions Jim and I don't know much (you can ask my wife) . I think you have already picked up on some of this judging by your winter photos of your daughter.
11-14-2011, 02:44 AM
Well, I appreciate your feedback anyway lol. I see what you mean especially in the first shot. Those big wrinkles are pretty distracting running through that large negative space. The shadows are a little on the deep side, but I personally like them that way... not sure why.
11-14-2011, 01:29 PM
Jim, I like the shadows too. They seem to add character to the face. I too find the wrinkles distractive in the first picture but overall, I like these...You did a good job...
11-14-2011, 01:38 PM
thank you Judy :)
11-15-2011, 06:55 PM
I would straighten the back drop
I liek the last one the best
11-16-2011, 02:44 AM
I though the big wrinkles would look kinda cool like a big curtain, but it didn't work out so well lol.
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