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Dan
05-05-2009, 04:01 PM
the left side has some details that i should have left out. i was just interested in the roses. and on top of that a little pratice never hurts.


http://i640.photobucket.com/albums/uu123/DAN_C_01/100b2950.jpg

coffee
05-05-2009, 06:07 PM
Here is a very fast edit to do as you asked and to give it more depth. The vignette might be a little much. I also notice that your focus isn't hitting where you probably wanted it to. It's much sharper on the leaves behind the roses. Do you use all focus points so your camera decides where to focus? if so I suggest taking control of the focus so you decide where the focus should be hitting.

Also it may just be me, but it almost looks like some of the roses were pasted in. This may not be the case, but they have a strange edge on them like they were pasted or over sharpened.

Again this was just 2 minutes of editing. I love to help out but don't have much time to get things the way I would want the end result to look. But I hope this helps.

Dan
05-05-2009, 08:27 PM
no pasting - taken after a brief rain shower
they were weighted down - hard to get a good shot