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TATEPHOTO
07-24-2009, 07:22 AM
hey im new to this forum but can yall let me know what ya think of this pic..?http://www.proudphotography.com/forum/picture.php?albumid=201&pictureid=1280[/IMG]


thanks Jonathan Tate

coffee
07-24-2009, 02:42 PM
It's an interesting abstract. I love the subject myself and have tried these smoke shots. Not easy. I personally feel the image isn't weighted well composition wise, and the image is too soft overall. Also not sure what that large black band going from O'Clock to 5 O'clock is on the right third of the shot. It looks it was erased black in PS or something. Like I said, it's interesting, but too many things I would consider a little off to consider it a keeper. Have you worked with smoke before, or was this one of your first try's at it?

Thanks for sharing it.

TATEPHOTO
07-24-2009, 06:44 PM
thanks !! The black band is another log in the fire...

coffee
07-24-2009, 06:47 PM
thanks !! The black band is another log in the fire...

My apologies. I didn't realize it was a fire, I thought it was a smoke sculpture.

TATEPHOTO
07-24-2009, 07:23 PM
Haha ya its a fire