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jimboudreaux
09-21-2011, 05:03 PM
hey everybody, I'm on my final assignment, but this is my 1st time posting anything in the forum. I hope I do it right. Anyway, I'm not sure if this is the best place to post this, but I was hoping for a little feedback. I have two shots I'm considering for the landscape shot, so if anybody could let me know if they look decent enough, or should I keep shooting. Any feedback is much appreciated :)1622116220

jimboudreaux
09-21-2011, 05:44 PM
I'm also thinking of using one of these two for the abstract shot.

shirlm2
09-21-2011, 06:49 PM
Hi there, I think you would probably do better to post your shots under the critique section of the forum as I suspect this area is more for chat. Anyway I will be happy to give you my thoughts.

Of the landscape shots I really like your first shot. You have nice foreground interest in the rocks and the horizon is nicely on the third. I also like the interesting bridge to the right. Your exposure looks good too. My only comment would be to watch the horizon as it seems to slope slightly but this is easily fixed in editing. The second shot has nice clouds and jetty leading into the shot but I find the green water weed or whatever it is, distracting.

Of your abstract shots, I personally would not classify these as abstract. I would think of something with more of a pattern but others might be able to give you better ideas.

jimboudreaux
09-21-2011, 09:50 PM
Thanks for the advice Shirley. I started a new thread under landscapes.