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    Pebbles

    Not sure about this image, still working on how I wish to present it, but it is another one on my list of images I want to shoot.
    See what you think, as always critique more than welcome.
    Thanks for looking.
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    Re: Pebbles

    Interesting......in my mind (take that for what its worth!) I would have left a bit more of the surrounding ground around them and left it as a minimalistic photo. I love the pattern on the rocks and the shadows.
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    Re: Pebbles

    Nice image, Jon.
    A la Mary, I think just a little more space would be nice. A bit more of a gap between the top shadow and the edge of the frame, i think. But just a bit.
    Looking at it I was wondering how different focuses (focii ?) on the three different pebbles would look. (All very Zen, I'm sure).
    Perhaps a triptych, with the focus on succeeding pebbles in each element.
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    Re: Pebbles

    Thanks Mary & Pat, appreciate the comments. Good point about the extra space needed. I will have to try the triptych look with focus on each, thank you for getting me this weekends assignment!
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